Sunday, 21 December 2025

form over content

 







form over content 

Imago thinks about the car   the snow falling

the snow falling settling on the car

flakes flitting   flake fitting to flake to form

the puzzle of ice   a tight skin of ice forming  

a headache of ice   a skull of ice 

a puzzle without pieces   pieces

he will have to make   tap tap tap

the handle of a hand-held brush dusting

off the snow shush shush to uncover ice

tap tap tapping   the ice cracking

slivers   and shards   shivers   but now

the car shrouded stolid stoic the snow

building itself into a shroud thickening

unthinking solidifying snow turning into ice

ice like a skin tightening on his life

the key in his pocket the key to the car

four days the car has sat shrouded in snow

nowhere to go   nothing to show for

 

the key in his pocket   turn the key

turn the key to open the door

turn the key for the engine to start

his hand on the key in his pocket

to open the door to unlock it to start

the engine to warm it up    the engine

to melt the ice to turn the ice into water 

back into water   water flowing   the car moving

 

the snow falling   nowhere to go   falling 

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